Thursday, June 30, 2016

My 3 little pig writing

     
I have been learning to retell a 3 little pig story I made it a little bit different.
In my story I have 3 different houses, 1 paper, 2 books and 3 marble.
Even the mail box is made of marble books and paper.
Something that challenged me was it was hard to think about what to have as the materials for the houses.
I didn't want 1 strore (straw) 2 sticks and 3 marble.
I stretched my noticing muscle when I was checking that I'm finished.      

Here is my writing:


                                                                 THE THREE LITTLE PIG
                     
One  perfectly fine day. 3 little pigs got some
Horrifying news. That they have to leave their house to go and make 3 houses.
The first pig made his house out of paper. It was folded colourful paper. It had 4 windows and an upstairs and a kitchen. Even the mailbox was made out of paper.                                                 
Then came the big foley got loads of hare nasty wolff. And he Sade little. Pig little  pig let
Me come in and the pig sad not by the haye of my chiny can can. And the wolf sad Than I will     huff and i puff and poloo the door in and he did   but the pig got away

Then the 2 pig made his house out of books. There was a book Kitchin a book dore
And evine a book  mall box. Now the first pig went to the 2 pigs house. The 1 pig sad
2 pig  let me in and the 2. Pig sad come in 1 pig. along came the big bad wolf and
The wolf  sad little pigs little pigs let me come in. And the pigs sadness  not by the hay of
My ciey cin cin and the wolf sad than I will huff and puff and polo the doo down
And he did.  But the pigs got away.  The 3 pig made his house out.  Of marble. It was.
Very strong and hard and even had a marble.  Maly box. Along came the 2 pigs
The 2 pigs sad let us in 3 pig the 3 pig sad come in.  1 pig and 2 pig the 1 pig sad
This is colony in here along came the big bad wolf and the wolf sad
Little pigs little pigs let me come in and l the pigs sad not by the hey of my Chiny cink
cin .
The Wolff sad then I will haff and  puff and he did. But he couldn't do it you can't do it sad the pig
Piling the x box  and the big bad wolf climbed in the chimney. But then the big bad wolf sad yes
I'm in no yore not yore Boeing sad the 3 pig. The wolf sad nooooooooooo
And that's the end of the wolf so they eat the wolf for 10 days

1 comment:

  1. What a long story Joshua.
    I like how you used lots of interesting extra detail in your writing.

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